TOPIC:Lost in Woods
Ages: 11-12
Alone Again
Agent 909
12/3/2011


Snap. A twig brakes under a foot. I should of never tried to go to the party, Shannon thought. She had been stumbling through the woods looking for Lisa's house. She had finally got invited to her party. Shannon glance back in the direction of her warm house, but it was too late. Her mom would kill her if she walked through the door in her best dress and her church shoes. Shannon wasn't even allowed to go to Lisa's party. Shannon started to run farther in. She was at top speed when another twig broke behind her, and she looked back. In that same moment she tripped over a stone and fell into a mud puddle. now her bright yellow dress was a brown color. Shannon dragged herself onto the rock she tripped over. She cried out loud, while talking to her dad who died a few mouths ago.
"Dad are you there?" she asked the sky. "What am I doing? Lisa is a bully. Why am I going to her party?" Shannon looked up to the sound of music. A cottage was at the bottom of a hill. A banner read: Lisa 12th Birthday Party. Shannon skipped down the hill forgetting my conversation with the air. She walked in the house and started to dance but people stared at her brown dress. Shannon almost left when Lisa threw a water balloon at her.
"You needed a wash." Lisa snickered. A prank. the whole party was a prank. Shannon thought as she cried more. First her dad died, then her Mom got mean, now a water balloon. She had no one. She was alone again. Shannon left humiliated. on the way back through the woods Shannon got an idea.
"God," she pleaded. "Help me and Mom to get through this tough time..."
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