TOPIC:Mouse
Ages: 11-12
The Mouse Game
Agent 909
11/20/2011


I watched as my owners eyes where glued to something electronic like a cell-phone, lap-top, TV, or a video game. I was to cold and kept crying at the door in pain, but no one cared about that. They keep saying that I'm an outside cat, well, I'm tired of being a outside cat. Suddenly screaming breaks into the room, as the female starts to climbs on top of the couch pointing at the biggest mouse I've ever seen and being one small black cat, this mouse is almost as big as me. I watch as all the female owners (and one male) are standing on top of whatever they find, while one male owner is crying with a broom in his hand. He swings it wildly on the ground. Wrap wrap wrap sound of the broom plus shrieking is all you can hear. Out of the yelling and wrap sound the smallest owner points at me with her delicate finger. Everyone is silenced until the owner with the broom opens the door to let me in. I welcome the warm air until i see the mouse, then I whimper to go out in the snow. The mouse charges me with hate. I weep in terror, but in that moment I see something better then my fear, the mouses tail. It swished and swashed behind him. My back legs go upwards while my front go down. In one slow-mo second I jump forward onto the beast tail, trapping in under me paw. With the victory and family love, I get an extra meal of bravery.
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