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*~Koko Down Under~*
12/15/2009

Once upon a time there was a girl named Amy. She lived in a small town which was very quiet and very friendly. One Saturday morning she walked down the road and listened to the usual sounds: the birds singing, a mower in the backround, soft engines of cars in the distance. She walked down to the town's ice cream shop and was greeted by a man with grey hair,a broad body and a friendly smile. Amy new this man very well. His name was Mr. Friendson. Amy walked into the colourful building and smiled. She loved going to this place to undwind.
She went up to the front counter and asked for a chocalate ice-cream. Then she walked up the stairs and went down a corridor.Amy saw all the happy kids laughing with a joyful smile on their face. Then Amy saw her friend (who Amy thought was her best friend) Amanda and went over to talk to her.
When Amanda saw Amy coming she quickley ran over to her and said "Have you heard of the picture in Mr. Friendsons new room?" "No i havn't Amy replied."Well my friends are saying that there is a magic picture in there." "They're probably just messing with ya Mandy"."Nothing to worry about".

"Well if you think theres nothing to worry about come and see for yourself".

" You mean you've been?"

"Yeah last night".

Amy was angry and dissapointed that her friend did that wrong thing but was also exited.

"Its really good". Amanda bribed her. "Come on".

"Oh ok" Amy got fooled into Amanda's trap.

10:00pm
"OK Amanda wheres the room?". "Its over here, through this door, here".
"At 10:30 the pictures going to do something.

10:30pm
The room turned dark. The only light was from the picture. Fire came out of the picture and there was a musical sound. There was a picture of Mr. Friendson and a girl which looked like Amy.
Then Mr.Friedson said something about losing his trust. Then she was in school and bullying some little girls. Then there was Amy in detention sitting next to Amanda. Then the picture went blank. Amy got it. She shouldn't go for the fame and glory or to be popular she should of stood up for what was right.

"Hello" It was Mr. Friendson.

Ooops. The consequencs of her action was almost losing trust with Mr. Friendson.....and cleaning his shop everyday for a month.

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