My Poems
Ages: 9-10
THE SUN A shimmer of gold
~Winterstorm ~
11/8/2008


A shimmer of gold

Not very cold

It shines with all it's might

What a pretty site

Trying to keep planets from frost

So the planets will not be lost

The bigest of the strars

It is not a planet like mars

Shimmer shimmer

Glimmer glimmer

Shiny piece of gold

It keeps planets warm new ones and old
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