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To Heard by God
Sophia Snipes
8/8/2016


I think that's an awesome idea!
I'd like to see how it turns out.
I can alter the story a little, maybe change it so that Midnight loses his memory in the crash, but there is one problem, I had a plan for where Midnight came from, so the crash part would work, but the part where Midnight is 17 wouldn't.
But you could change your idea a little, maybe the liquid that spilled on Midnight could slowly make him younger and younger, and by the time he crashes, he could be a baby.
Would that work?
Happy writing!

~Sophia

(P.S. Do you play Minecraft? Or is it a coincidence that the name Hirobrine is so close to Herobrine?)
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