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Reveiw For SummerRose - Zielle
Zielle S.
4/18/2014


Hi Summer. I agree with HeavenlyDaughter.

Your plots are great, but you could use a little improvement.
I like the way how you write at the end of your stories to make the reader want to read more, like you wrote at the latest chapter you wrote in Stella Santana. I couldn't wait to find out more! Keep that up.

Iíd like it if you gave me a review about my stories. I know I need to finish at least one story, but...anyway. Yeah!

I donít know how to explain how to improve your books, but good luck and listen to the other reviewers! :)

Oh yeah, and be sure to get your grammar and spelling right.
Luv, Zielle
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