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Ages: 11-12
Bowstring-Chapter Forty
*~Laffy Taffy Girl~*
4/27/2012


Dedrick sprints off, growing smaller and

smaller. I sit down on a bench and begin to

daydream.

If I can get into that weapons room and maybe

snag a bow and a bunch of arrows, I think, and

Etara and I could go in the archer's ranks

behind a protective wall. I hope that I get into

an archer squad. I begin to doze off, my closing

eyelids blurring the room before me.

Before I know what's happening. Dedrick is

shaking me awake.


"Jillo! C'mon! You fell asleep! Kadag found us a

squad of eight! We're going to the archery

range. We need to you give some of them shooting

tips."


I jerk my eyes open and sit up

straight. "Archery range? Let's go!" I toss the

stopwatch into the bin, pick up my sheet, and

follow Dedrick.


I see a small group of people standing huddled

together next to a table with bows and arrows

spread out on it. A small man with white hair is

talking to them, using his hands to point to

certain bows and arrows.

Dedrick leads me to them and the small man turns

and gives me a smile.


"Hello, I see you have come to join us! We are

currently learning how to shoot a bow and

arrow. I am Mr. Grinozzer. I assume you are

Jillo Waterford."


I nod. "I already-"


"Now, since you have come from one of the towns

under the City's control, I assume you have

never used a weapon before." Mr. Grinozzer

raised an eyebrow.


"Well, actually-"


He picks up a polished bow that gleams like

silver, its darkened wood gleaming in the light.

My eyes shine, and a smile spreads across my

lips.


"This is called a bow," Captain Obvious

says. "He picks up a yellow arrow. "This is an

arrow." He strings the bow, sights, and fires.


The arrow thrums six inches away from the

target. Everyone whistles except for Dedrick and

me.


"My goal is to teach you to accomplish this in

the next week or so," he says.


Then he begins to give us a detailed tutorial-

the basic basics. Everyone fires. Most miss the

target altogether. Mr. Grinozzer happens to

forget me. He continues to teach us with out

giving me a chance to show off. As immoral as

that may sound, I dislike Mr. Grinozzer almost

as much as Buarka.


Night falls. Finally Mr. Grinozzer says, "Using

all the techniques you've learned, let's see you

shoot one more time."


A fifteen-year-old boy shoots. He hits the third

ring out from the bull's eye. A seventeen-year-

old girl goes after him. She hits the fourth

ring. Two other twin girls hit the third ring.

Three boys miss the target althogether, and the

last boy hits right in between the fourth and

fifth ring. Dedrick fires and hits the third

ring. Finally, it is my turn.

The scar across my chest suddenly begins to

hurt. I'd forgotten all about it.

I wince as I slowly pull back the string. I pull

it farther back than my shoulder. The bow slowly

bends. I close one eye and lift the bow up,

estimating...

And release.

THUD.

The arrow buries itself in the center of the

bull's eye.

Mr. Grinozzer stares. So does everyone else.


"Can I keep the bow? I left mine at home." I

emphasize the word 'mine.'


Mr. Grinozzer's mouth opens and closes.


"I'll take that as a yes." I grab several arrows

and walk out.


I glance at my sheet. We meet every morning at

eight. We're supposed to sleep in the soldier's

quarters in the west wing, but I decide to sleep

in the apartment Buarka gifted to Mother.


Then tomorrow night, it's a visit to the weapons

room.
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