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Bowstring-Chapter Thirty Eight
*~Laffy Taffy Girl~*
4/26/2012


Yes, the book is long. I know. It's not even close to being done. At least ten more chapters, if not more.
...And finally, another really long one! :)






Dedrick looks at me. "Well, I won't waste times

with ers, uhs, or ahems," he said. "It was that

old witch lady."


"Mother Hathol," I say.


"At any rate," he continues, "It was right

before the bombing. I was in the market square

when Mother Hathol grabbed my arm and told me to

run as fast as I could into the forest. When I

stared at her, she stared at me, and" -he took a

shaky breath- "For some reason, it was like she

could slip a piece of information into my mind.

It was like she told my mind to go into the

forest, no asking questions. So I dropped

everything and ran." He exhaled. "It took me

about half and hour to get here. I didn't stop.

When I reached the lake, I saw movement on the

other side. Rebel guards grabbed me and lugged

me down here. They brought me before Buarka for

trespassing. When I told her what happened, she

believed me, I guess. She put me in that

ridiculous suit." he glances at me. "You didn't

think I looked good in it, did you?"


I laugh.


Dedrick gives me a small grin. "Now tell me how

you got here."


So I tell him. When I finish, I cry, "Oh no! I

hope Arrow's alright! she was in the forest with

Samson when the bombing began!"


"It's okay," Dedrick says. "Samson was with her.

He'll protect her, not that she doesn't already

know how."


I gave a weak smile. "I guess."


Dedrick stands up. "Now let me show you around

this place."



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The rebel who had brought us our drinks*, Kadag,

leads us around. I don't really pay attention

that much. All I really took in was: This is is

BIG. But when Kadag mentions the word "bow", I

tune in.



"Sorry, what?" I ask.



Kadag raises her eyebrows. "This is the weapon

room, or the Arsenal." She gestures to a doorway

on our right. "It contains weapons from machine

guns to spears. THere are even bows and arrows,

but the arrows were modified, with explosive or

poisoned tips. The same for crossbows, and there

are even spears."


I stopped listening after the words 'poisoned

tips.'


"Can I have one of the bows and some arrows? Can

we go in there? Can we practice? Is there an

archery range?"


Kadag sighs. "No, no, yes, and yes. The Arsenal

Room is for authorized personel only, or you

must have a signed permission slip from Buarka.

You may practice on the weapons practice room,

right there." She pointed at the door to the

left.


"Um okay, the tour can end now, goodbye," I say,

breaking away and hurrying into the training

room. Kadag and Dedrick have no choice but to

follow me.


When I step inside, I can only stop and stare.

It is a huge room - almost larger than the

Control Room. The Training Room was full of

people, punching bags, fencing with fake swords,

lifting weights, running down a large red track,

and - to my pleasure - shooting down a hundred-

foot archery range.


"Ah, the Training Room," Kadag sighs. "New

recruits train here for twelve months, training

in all catagories. Every January, a group of ten

comes in this room, one day per ten, and

performs for five certain judges. The ten are

rated in a ten scale, and if the total of the

ten's rankings are above seventy, then they pass

and form a squad. If they don't, its another

twelve months."


"Huh." Dedrick says. "Can we train?"


Kedrig eyes us. "There is no age limit, but we

can't let an eighty year old or a three year old

train for the army. Well, I suppose they could,

but I doubt either of them would pass."


"So we can?"


"Fine. I'll give you each a list of the things

you must be able to do adequately to pass.

Sadly, you are several months behind in

training." She hands us each a paper. "I will

find a group of eight and an instructor you can

work with, unless yuo would like to wait nine

months?" She raises an eyebrow.


"Nah, I'll do it," I say quickly. Dedrick agrees.


"All right. I'll be back in a few minutes.

Explore a bit."


She left.


I made a beeline for the archery range, but

Dedrick stopped me. "Look at the chart," he

said. We have to be able to shoot an arrow at a

target fifty feet away and hit within twenty

inches of the bull's eye."


"So?"


"Shoudln't you work on something else? You've

already mastered shooting."


"Fine," I snarl. I scan the paper, looking for

the most interesting. "Fencing." I head for the

rack of fake swords.


"No," Dedrick says, stopping me again.


"What?!" I snap.


"That's rally hard. We can't start that by

ourselves. Let's work on running."


He grabs my wrist and leads me to the large red

track by the far wall.

I estimate that it is about quarter of a mile

long. (Yes, the room is that big)


Dedrick consults the chart. "We've got to run to

the end and back in twenty minutes."


"Twenty?!" I cry, looking with distaste at the

track.


White lines about three feet apart

seperated the large track into sections so

several people could run at once, each with

numbers spray-painted onto them.


"I'll go first." Dedrick puts down his sheet of

paper on a bench and takes running shoes and

socks from a large rack next to the track.


I look around and see a large bin that happens

to have stop watches in it.


"Ready?" I ask Dedrick as he finishes tying the

laces of his last shoe.


"Okay," he replies and crouches at the front of

the track by an empty section marked as Section

Nine.


"Go!" I yell, and Dedrick races away as I press

the START button.



What I don't know is that Gilan is yelling that

same exact thing, far away, in the City.




*See Chapter Thirty Three
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