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Forever Together-3
*~Passionate Poppie~*
3/2/2012


It was a short walk to the swampy area. Jordan was jittery although I really couldn't see why. I tried to slip my hand into his (after all he was my middle-school crush) but he rubbed his eyes to occupy his hands. When we reached the swamp, I ran into the water. There was hissing some where, and I quickly retreated to the water's edge. "Let's swim for food," I whispered. "Let's not. Alligators still thrive, and .........no." I sighed. Jordan seemed no fun, but I he was my.....uh.......partner. I grabbed his hand, and yanked him into the water were he tried to get out. I laughed and pulled him farther until I couldn't stand. "Jordan help!" I screamed as I pretended to drown. "Sorry, no," said Jordan. I sat up and tredded water. Jordan laughed as I glared, then he screamed. I turned around and saw a monster gator coming. "Are you cereal?" I shrieked as I began to breaststroke away. Jordan flipped and floundered like a puppy first learning to swim. "Gosh dang it Jordan! Propell your arms and legs forth!" I heard splashing then all was silent. I stopped swimming and turned around. Bubbles surfacing. "JORDAN!" I screamed. I saw something bubble around me. The alligator! I began to freak, and screamed when Jordan surfaced blue faced. "I....swam....under.....water," he gasped and ran up the bank. I quickly followed and he collapsed once free from the water. I collapsed on his chest and we panted in harmony. We saw the gator surface some 60ft on the opposite bank. "You know?" I panted. "What?" said Jordan. "You scream like a girl." I looked up and saw him smirk his cute smirk.
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