My Stories
Ages: 9-10
Lost Hope. Part2
*~Koko Down Under~*
8/23/2010


Liliana hurried to the almost burnt stable.
She got Prince, the mighty stalion that could save her life. She got a black bag, which contained a sword a blanket and some bread and water, and stuffed her stuff in. She hopped up onto Prince and galloped out of the stable just in time for a plank of black, burnt wood fell; blocking the entrance. Lil galloped fast and turned to see her magnificent castle, crushed by Zachila.
Zachila, a mangy little villain, who had orange eyes and a red scar across his cheek. He was feared by everyone as he tortured everyone and had killed many.
Liliana rode all night long, her long black hair streaming out behind her.
In the morning Lil collapsed onto the ground breathless and tired. Suddenlly, there was a rustle in the bushes. Despite her broken heart and weary body, Liliana jumped up, fearlesly.
"Hi! I know someones there. I am Princess Liliana, I have a sword and I won't be afraid to use it against anyone." Lil looked around expecting to see one of Zachila's men, only seeing and African-American girl in her.....pyjamas.....just like her!
"My name is Princess Ranila. And I have a sword and I'M not afraid to use it" said the girl, eyeing Lil with The Eye............







TO BE CONTINUED...................
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